Recent research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released.
Why is this the case?
What can be done to solve this problem
It has been observed by many researchers that those who have committed the crime, owing to crime of passion, post released back into society they repeated the crime. I have also agreed with the researcher’s point of view, such kind of wrongdoers never be law-abiding citizens.
To begin with, there are multiple reasons to repeat the crime again, because society do not accept them not only but also no one provides job, consequently criminals again turn to crime, and they majorly involve into wide range of crimes namely drug trafficking, thief, robbery, as well as another bad activity. In addition to this, some people are habitual to commit crime, although they tried their best to avoid such criminal activities, but they are crime of passion.
To cite an example, according to last week The Hindu newspaper, there was an article published, researchers has written the very good example of crime and prisoners, in that article mentioned a story of a person who want to leave the criminal activities but he could not because of mental illness. Law agencies provided him multiple chances to reintegrate back into society, unfortunately he tried to make fresh start, but his surrounding community did not accept him.
In my opinion, if we put round the clock monitoring, additionally put observations by setting surveillance, also we if put criminal into probation possibly, he may leave the criminal activity.
In conclusion, if we give a chance of rehabilitation, moreover convince our society to take into consideration, also provides them equal opportunity for work, status. The criminal can embark the new life addition this he can become low-abiding citizen.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17712177122 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89553412401 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645756457565 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.0656104431 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.888888889 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1111111111 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5555555556 7.06120827912 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216735137319 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916545941662 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753403114322 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111366141728 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637082823673 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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