Recent research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released.
Why is this the case?
What can be done to solve this problem?
The latest research on criminal behavior reveals that the majority of them tend to commit a new crime after serving their sentences. In this essay, I will consider what the reasons are behind it and what measures can be implemented in order to improve the situation.
First, the prison was never able to improve someone’s behavior because prison is the place where criminals meet more experienced ones and learn from them how to break the law. In addition, they build useful connections in the criminal world spending a large amount of time together while being imprisoned. For example, a person being convicted for a minor crime would definitely meet people who committed severe crimes such as homicides, rapes, kidnapping, and similar ones, who would influence them in a negative manner.
Second, most countries do not have rehabilitation programs for former criminals. As a result, they cannot fit in and find a decent job, a place for living, or even might be non-accepted by society. This leads to the point when a person having a criminal record may feel desperate to build a normal life and because of the inability to do it, they commit another crime. For example, one of my former schoolmates committed his first petty crime at a very young age, then later without having an education and not being able to find a job started to steal cars.
One of the ways to tackle this problem can be implementing different approaches towards unserious offenses such as public works in hospitals, cleaning, and other places demanding free hands. In addition, it has to be demonstrated to them that good deeds are paying off and there is another way of living happy and satisfying lives. For instance, the government might launch a social program for juvenile offenders that will teach them a profession and probably provide a creative space where they could discover art. As well, a similar rehabilitation program can be launched for former prisoners in order to help them to be accepted as part of society.
In conclusion, being served a sentence with hard-core criminals and picking their habits and skills up, as well as not being able to find a job, due to these reasons, released first-time offenders tend to commit more crimes. This is because the government should establish a rehabilitation program for them that would help them to become law-obedient citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1987.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00503778338 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73294292392 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566750629723 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.3958331073 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.466666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4666666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263784080956 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876618833467 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537866341651 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159462129446 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609148828135 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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