Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions, like nurses, doctors, and teachers. Some people think it is fully justified, while others believe it is unfair.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary era top sports people are earning more money compared to health professionals and education professionals. I concur with the statement because sports personnel career span is very short as well as they represent the country on global level, so sports persons deserve the fame and respect for that.+
In addition, top achieved sportsman performed the arduous efforts, along with daily basis exercises which makes them valuable in front of public, if they win the medal of nation. To cite an example, in India there are multiple sportspersons who have done wonderful job in their field, such as won the gold medal in Olympic, Asian Games, Commonwealth Games. As a reward, Indian Government appointed them on high rank jobs, to cite an example, famous Cricketer Mahender Singh Dhoni was appointed as a Major in Indian Army, and there is large number of peoples who won the medal, government granted them huge money and secure job.
On the other hand, individuals believe that sportspersons are earning more money compares to other respective professionals, such as Doctors, Nurses, Teachers. Contrary point of view side individuals thinks that Health, and Education professionals should have privilege to earn more respect, fame, and money instead of sportspersons because doctors save the life of peoples as well as teacher educate the children, so they are nation builders.
In conclusion, all field professionals are playing a vital role in the development of the country, and without their contribution the nation cannot grow. According to my point of view, top notch sports personality represents the entire country on the global platform, so they are well deserved to earn more respect, secure jobs, because they are ideal for next generation and large number of kids follow them as an ideal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23208191126 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79400682857 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580204778157 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.4472112475 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 191.625 106.682146367 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.625 20.7667163134 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157448149445 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813081744504 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738829110749 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105542665346 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764815929691 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.0946893788 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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