You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened, and that you want your money back
To The Manager,
I would like to express my regret at having dined at your establishment last night; please allow me to explain.
The table was booked two months in advance since it was to cater for a major professional event, and yet we were informed by the maître upon arrival that there were no tables sufficiently large, and we had to dine separately. I did express my point to your staff as it was imperative that my party remain in each other’s company, even though we were told that it was impossible to sit us all together.
In addition to this, several food items were unavailable on that night, including every vegetarian option, owing to the fact that three members were left to eat only bread throughout the meal. As a result of this incident, I had intended not to pay, but your staff informed us that they would call the police if we refused, and to avoid adverse circumstances as well as embarrassment, I complied.
This experience was entirely unacceptable, and I would like to request a full refund of the amount which I paid on that night. I would also suggest that your staff did not promise customers degrees of service that they are unable to provide to avoid disappointing experiences such as these.
Sincerely,
Kuldip Kumar
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as to, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74090909091 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74642893606 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627272727273 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.153270197 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.375 76.5299724578 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 16.8248392259 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 4.34317383033 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115156044604 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478834631176 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355200043182 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746424283741 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339713045041 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 8.37731958763 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.