The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people nowadays believe that means of advertisement should be eliminated from the contemporary world, as there are little advantages from them and sometimes they even cause damage to the community. However, I personally disagree with this statement. In my opinion, I believe advertising is commercially beneficial and there are several actions instead of prohibition that can be taken to prevent the harmful effect.
First and foremost, the common drawbacks of this marketing method would be prevented by some governmental regulation. Firstly, buyers usually worry about dishonesty in product advertising. Even if products are properly introduced, sometimes the companies might boast about essential features, such as the outstanding effects or eternal longevity. It seems to be a threat at the first glance, however by imposing severe punishment to such behaviours, the government can prevent them immediately. Additionally, if parents believe their children might expose to inappropriate visual commercials, many enterprises nowadays, such as YouTube and Netflix, have introduced rules which restrict that type of content away from children under 18. Therefore, the ban of advertisement is unnecessary, as long as adults have awareness about its influence.
Besides, advertisement plays an important role in business, and it is also beneficial for the buyers. It was invented to illustrate products visually. For example, television commercials provide viewers with essential information like size, shape, special features of the commodity being advertised. Meanwhile, if people just vaguely understand the functions of an appliance, to watch a video of advertisement would be far more straightforward than to search for an instruction.
In conclusion, although the negative outcomes of advertisement can be serious, it would be solved simply by stringent rules given by authorities and platform owners. Also, it is beneficial in many ways to both businesses and customers. As a result, I believe a total prohibition of advertisement is unreasonable. Instead, we should encourage healthy ones to be generated.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77070063694 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3077445615 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627388535032 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6511626394 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.588235294 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191720026501 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532372001415 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437893295513 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118104359836 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042443511478 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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