In certain areas of the United States of America, teens are not to go out unaccompanied by an elderly person when it is late and dark at night due to the imposed movement restrictions. I am in support of this new development because it will keep them safe and make them a more responsible citizens of the country.
Although there could be instances when the young adults may need to go out unescorted,but more often than not such instances could be averted as their safety and general well-being is of utmost importance to their family and to the nation at large.We all know that these youths usually have an attitude or behaviour referred to as youthful-exubberance. For instance, some high school kids were involved in a ghastly motor accident in 1990, late at night due to reckless driving after partying and heavy drinking. 3 out of the 6 victims died after a while because help could not reach them on time as everywhere was dark and they were unnoticed for sometime.
It is very obvious that whoever most adults become later in life, usually stems from their upbringing as a child. Adolescent movements needs to be curtailed in other to raise dependable or responsible citizens who will harness the affairs of this country later in life. Youths today are the future of any nation, parents and carers should team-up with the government to ensure this is sustainable. For example, a recent study in Lagos shows that many adolescent are left to their on devices and not given a proper upbringing, leaving them to take certain decisions on their own especially the one that has to do with their movement at any given time. This trend has immensely affected majority of our would-be future leaders negatively.
In conclusion, it is very paramount that movements restrictions levied against the young adults should be sustained and supported by all in other to protect them from danger and make them grow into reliable adults.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87272727273 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77461270554 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.1926943947 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.181818182 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161119560833 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581103790534 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321253147722 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09090396644 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426315082371 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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