You lost an item on your recent vacation and wants to claim an insurance covering it

Essay topics:

You lost an item on your recent vacation and wants to claim an insurance covering it

Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing to make a claim on my travel insurance policy number 456. I lost my Rolex Watch during my recent trip to New Delhi. My name is XYZ and I bought this insurance policy prior to my trip. For your information, the policy covers the cost of any item that is lost during the journey.

I arrived in New Delhi on April 10 and checked into the five star hotel (name). In the evening I went for a swim in the pool. Before entering the pool I removed the watch and placed it on the pool side table but when I came out of the pool half an hour later, I found that the watch was missing. I immediately alerted the hotel staff but they could not trace my phone. Consequently, I filed a police complaint. I have attached a copy of the FIR and the invoice to this letter.

Since the policy covers the watch, I request you to approve my claim and compensate me for the full value of the watch. If you need any more information, please call me on my number: 000000

Thank you for your time and support.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely

XYZ

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 443, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...laint. I have attached a copy of the FIR and the invoice to this letter. Since...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, look

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23923444976 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24107395919 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593301435407 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2663469131 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.2857142857 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9285714286 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92857142857 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201826775982 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585467279653 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551134297117 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993424676898 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046947870037 0.0580467560999 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.72 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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