in some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
what is your opinion about this?
give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Imposing a curfew is not considered a general practice. Only in grave situations authorities have to implement such actions. Countries like US, restricting teenagers for going outdoors alone after dark, must have involved some unavoidable reasons. I personally support the idea of putting a ban on youngsters going out without any adult company at the time of curfew particularly.
On one hand, coming to a decision to impose a curfew brings about various reasons. Situations of lockdown, be it for anyone, is deemed to be in favour of society. Police is there to protect and safegaurd the citizens from any kind of riots and fights. There have been cases in the past where students of tender age indulged in fights and shot their own friends with gun. Due to such incidents governments have to interfere in order to maintain law and order by imposing ban on certain activities for sometime.
On the other hand, there have been much serious incidents documented in the recent past, where someone involved with a terror group, rundown the mob with his truck and killed several innocents. Considering these rising terrorist attempts, governments have become extra cautious and take every possible precautionary measures to safegaurd people. Kids have always remained easy targets of criminals and hence to keep them safe and secure, putting restrictions on their going out alone at night is a necessary and important initiative.
To conclude, it is imparative to follow the orders set by the state in favour of their citizens. Children are the future and protecting them should not only be a priority but an action forwarded to protecting their right to live.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10622710623 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75623927037 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4831156541 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5714285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146013908483 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494279284084 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468524223376 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859010000502 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609272473052 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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