Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is a fact that majority of organizations allocate a large part of profits for sponsoring popular events. Many argue that the trend has numerous advantages for the company; however, others think opposite. In my opinion it has both the merits and demerits for the company.
On the one hand, Financing sports activities has far more benefits for the businesses. Firstly, Advertising has become an integral part of every company whether it is small or large. A proprietor may enhance the turnover by advertising innovative products and services through funding various event or sports leagues. Moreover, international sports exhibitions are experienced by millions of audiences. As a result, they can pass on information regarding their new offers that will contributes in the wealth of the company. Secondly, In the modern age people prefer to buy popular brand’s products as they are curious to show their status among other people in the society. Hence, it is a incredible opportunity for a enterprise to gain popularity in order to attract customers as well as to enhance brand awareness. Finally, it creates positive image of the organization in the minds of users as it provide discounts , concessions on the market price of products via advertisement.
On the other hand, Along with plenty of benefits, the phenomenon has some adverse affects on the corporation. First of all, Sometimes company put huge amount of monetary sources towards sporting activities but it fails to build a good customer base. To be more specific, Individuals focus on the primary activity and overlook the publicity of products by many institutions. For example, Audience watch Live sports events for the purpose of entertainment and they ignore the commercials about goods and services. Therefore, it ruins the profits of the company because it does not meet the original purpose of adds.
To conclude, Although business organizations can get positive results by sponsoring reality show in exchange for advertisement, i also believe that it may spoil financial resources of business when adds are not considered by consumers.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30952380952 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01850871042 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.239366299 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.941176471 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8235294118 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157900940882 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443961114634 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333050813086 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825374255883 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380919131256 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e a large part of profits for sponsoring popular events. Many argue that the tren...
^^
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... may enhance the turnover by advertising innovative products and services through...
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Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... sports leagues. Moreover, international sports exhibitions are experienced by mi...
^^
Line 3, column 690, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...her people in the society. Hence, it is a incredible opportunity for a enterprise...
^
Line 3, column 719, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nce, it is a incredible opportunity for a enterprise to gain popularity in order ...
^
Line 3, column 920, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e minds of users as it provide discounts , concessions on the market price of prod...
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Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ement. On the other hand, Along with plenty of benefits, the phenomenon has s...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...enomenon has some adverse affects on the corporation. First of all, Sometimes com...
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...ducts by many institutions. For example, Audience watch Live sports events for th...
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...rpose of adds. To conclude, Although business organizations can get positive ...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s can get positive results by sponsoring reality show in exchange for advertiseme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30952380952 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01850871042 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.239366299 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.941176471 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8235294118 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157900940882 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443961114634 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333050813086 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825374255883 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380919131256 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.