Some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views
There are a few countries, which motivate adolescents to work half-time as well as consider it beneficial for their upcoming future. However, there are others who contradict this view. I agree that adolescent individuals who work temporarily end up having a valuable work experience and consummate skills but doing a job or not should be completely decided by the youth itself, hence they should not be restricted at any level.
It is considered by some countries that doing a temporary job is extremely beneficial because this not only develops a sense of responsibility but also punctuality in today’s youth. Moreover, working part-time enables adolescents to cover all of their educational and personal expenses through their remuneration. Adolescents doing a half-time job will gain a valuable experience that would help them earn a decent job when they step in their professional field.
Nevertheless, other countries hold a firm belief that working part-time would bring no advantage to youth and thus should not be practiced because this would over burden the adolescents with responsibilities of both education and employment. Furthermore, majority of their time would be consumed in job after school rather than studying, resultantly this will affect their grades and cause an imbalance in their social and personal life or might even result in psychological disorders.
In my opinion, I agree that working part-time has many significant advantages and helps in reshaping youth’s future but I believe that adolescents should be given the authority to make their own decisions regarding their work life, instead of imposing them with decisions against their will. Whether adolescents should work temporarily or not should be solely their own decision by keeping various key elements in mind such as their financial status, availability, feasibility, mental capability, gaining a valuable experience, interest in a particular field or if they want to pursue their career in that certain field.
In conclusion, today’s youth should be motivated but not enforced to do a job on temporary basis thus adolescents should opt to work independently depending upon their will, comfort and needs.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50292397661 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12163501673 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576023391813 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.0989489804 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.090909091 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0909090909 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108105900544 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056245502951 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033480018721 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698098506433 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376730314438 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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