In some countries, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishment. To what extent do you agree?
Juvenile delinquency, indeed, appears to be more prevalent in some communities. People have different perspectives concerning the punishment for young criminals. I vehemently contend that teenagers should receive adult punishment, irrespective of the age, and numerous reasons can be attributed to support this.
The most preponderant reason for this is that it generates equality among inhabitants of society. All people must abide by the law and follow them in their life. If the teenagers do not get adult punishment, it will reflect the discriminating and biasing characteristic of the constitution, which in turn may initiate differences, and disrupt the peace and the national integrity. For instance, if a teenager, victim of an acid attack, do not get harsh punishment equivalent to adult criminals, committing the same crime, then the justice of the system would be questioned.
Another worth mentioning reason is that it is necessary to deter crime, and for maintaining a crime-free ambiance. If young offenders do not get stern punishment, then further chances of reoffending will be higher than those who already faced strict punishment. Also, some communities protect young criminals through Children Protection Act, which influences them to perpetrate a heinous crime.
However, some people believe in not penalizing the young criminals with strict punishments, as it ruins their entire life behind bars, and they must be allowed to establish in society. For instance, in some of the societies, it is observed that teenagers, who are petty offenders, are given punishment to do unpaid community work. As a result, they realize the repercussions of committing a crime and may turn into a good citizen. Be that it may, I believe that young criminals require retribution equivalent to adult criminals.
In conclusion, young offenders need to give punishment similar to adult criminals owing to, promote equality among citizens, and maintain a crime-free society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49180327869 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12354239051 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567213114754 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0267595396 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254375132039 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789367603324 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432163226089 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138977667553 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298124213691 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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