In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?
Nowadays, buying and owning a house instead of a renting accommodation is vital for people in some countries. This essay will discuss that this might be due to the fact that owning their own house is better than paying monthly rents for nothing, and individuals would not move into other accommodations every period of time. Also, this is a positive phenomenon since folks could do whatever they want with the house.
On the one hand, one of the reasons beyond that individuals prefer to buy their own type of accommodation is that instead of pay rent every month with no any benefits, paying almost the same amount of money for purchasing the house is better. In addition, another considerable reason is that if they go for a rent house, they are not settled, and may change their house every period of time. This is because that the residence is not theirs, hence, the owner could change their mind and tell them to leave. For instance, when I was in Turkey, I had to move into three different flats in one year since in each one the owners decided to not rent their property.
On the other hand, this is a positive situation because when individuals buy their own house, they could be comfortable with the residence in terms of decorating it, or deciding to build another storey. Furthermore, you could not decide the number of dwellers and how many children you could have in the accommodation unless you own it. For example, in Canada, most of the owners when they list the house or flats for lease, they do not want any children in the family who is renting the dwelling.
In conclusion, these days in many countries, many individuals desire to have their own dwelling rather than a renting one, this essay discussed why they prefer that, and why this is a positive trend as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ot move into other accommodations every period of time. Also, this is a positive phenomenon si...
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Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...at instead of pay rent every month with no any benefits, paying almost the same am...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ttled, and may change their house every period of time. This is because that the residence is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66561514196 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49294000592 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485804416404 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.7076364825 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.454545455 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8181818182 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309994950887 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126315234811 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654439717902 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217160596879 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680401100463 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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