In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies.What do you think are the cause of this?What solutions can you suggest?
Attaining good education in many countries is the prime criteria for a rewarding career thus young people devote most of the time on their studies and least on leisure activities. In my opinion expectations and lack of better opportunities are the pivotal causes. In the below paragraphs I will elucidate on these causes and would suggest possible solutions.
Firstly it is a well-known fact that from primary school till the tertiary education adolescents are put under a lot of pressure as their guardians and mentors have a huge expectation from them. Due to this, the young children are under immense pressure to perform well, therefore, put strenuous efforts to score well in the exams. This involves devoting most of the time in studies and avoiding leisure activities. For instance, in India, many students in a poll conducted on Economic Times voted for an expectation of higher grades from parents and teacher to be a major reason for a lot of pressure. Additionally, another cause is limited number of opportunities in developing countries like India, Srilanka therefore for getting an admission in the top-universities one has to put in hard work and let go of leisure activities. For example in India according to a recent published article many students aspire to study in a prestigious institute like IIT but only a 3000 students get a chance to study out of millions every fall.
Alternatively there can be some solutions which can help to eradicate these problems. First and foremost teachers and guardians must play a positive role in lowering the pressure on children to study moreover they should encourage them to do outdoor sport activities. Apart from this government should encourage the tertiary institutes to consider both educational and part-time activity credentials while providing admissions to prestigious institutes. This will help maintain a balance between the work and leisure activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25242718447 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98704625061 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592233009709 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4398960067 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.846153846 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211934214659 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726103660994 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432604421724 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138206776695 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00457802106072 0.056905535591 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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