A certain number of medicinal practitioners believe that senior citizens should increase their social interaction and keep themselves physically active to lead a happy and healthy lifestyle, yet most of them cannot do so due to living in segregated conditions. This essay will try to identify the reasons behind this trend and offer some possible solutions to prevent this problem.
Evidently, several causes have been observed behind this current problem. Firstly, many elders live alone in their houses because their children have been migrated to cities in search of better career opportunities. As a result, older people live in an isolated environment. While going out and talking to neighbors could be still possible, however, many pensioners choose to stay within their houses. Because this could be due to muscle pains and nagging aches problems that afflict everyone at their age. Unfortunately, due to a lack of physical body movements, their health deteriorates even further. Moreover, some seniors believe that they have been discharged from all the duties and there is no goal left in their lives to accomplish. With such effect, they tend to live a life of inactivity and seclusion.
Fortunately, every problem has its own solution. And, with this ongoing problem, there are a few solutions to encounter the effect of the unhappy and unhealthy lifestyle of elders in modern society. Chiefly, government and private organizations should offer jobs to senior citizens according to the years of experience they have served in their lives. It will not only help the elders to stay mentally and socially occupied while putting their extensive experience and expertise to better use but also public and private organizations benefits by getting a mentor to give the right direction and guidance to company new employees are also known as freshers. For instance, nowadays many multinational companies hire freelance consultants who have been retired from their jobs to consultant workers jobs in their firms. Furthermore, older people should indulge in more hobbies which they find interesting. To exemplify, yoga and morning walks in a park can keep a person on his toes and physically fit. Lastly, seniors can join local clubs with their peers and friends to reduce loneliness.
To conclude, elders, lead a sedentary and lonesome lifestyle mainly due to age-related ailments that restrict their movement. They can solve these problems to a great extent by getting involved in community work and pursuing a hobby.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, still, while, for instance, as a result, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2130.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31172069825 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76924555893 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613466334165 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 662.4 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2539590557 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.05 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179308978118 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536180692138 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361760212406 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996316607962 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490480501794 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, still, while, for instance, as a result, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2130.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31172069825 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76924555893 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613466334165 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 662.4 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2539590557 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.05 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179308978118 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536180692138 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361760212406 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996316607962 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490480501794 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.