Some health professionals suggest that older people spend more time socializing with others and playing sports to stay healthy, but many retired people have experienced loneliness and a lack of fitness. Why has this happened? What can be done to address this
Some healthcare practitioners suggested older citizens occupy their time in social activities and remain physically fit, however, most of them are staying alone and unfit in modern society. This essay will discuss the reason behind this problem along with its resolution.
Apparently, various factors make a section of people advocate that older citizens tend to occupy time in entertaining themselves and have many reasons to substantiate it. First and foremost is the reason that most of the elder people do not work anymore in their lives as their children can handle the cost of living for them. As a result, older people tend to mingle in other activities like making new friends of their age group to walk and enjoy good conversations with them. For instance, nowadays, in the morning, a group of elder citizens can be seen in the park during morning time doing physical exercises and yoga. In addition, it is a beneficial factor to keep their body physically fit and healthy as at older age health problems arise easily such as blood pressure, muscle aches, and heartache problem.
On the contrary, other retired people are isolated and live an unhealthy lifestyle for a certain number of reasons. Chiefly, modern society has brought many changes to a lifestyle as most of the new generation individuals are busy in their own lives. They do not tend to care about elders in their homes. Consequently. elder ones start experiencing depression issues which lead them to an unhealthy lifestyle. Moreover, due to depression, older people try to resolve such health problems by taking medicines instead of not enjoying the last days of their lives. Eventually, they become unfit and live an unhappy life.
As every problem has a solution, there could be a solution to fix the problem of a retired person's lifestyle like young adults should take care of their seniors for a few hours on daily basis to avoid loneliness among elders. Moreover, pensioners should join extracurricular activities to keep up their bodies physically fit and lead a healthy lifestyle to prevent diseases that could be easily attained at their age. Lastly, the government should build old age communities for elders so that retired ones can stay in their own company and make friends remove the isolation section from their lives. With all these solutions, there could be a huge change for the modern society elders lifestyle.
To conclude, doctors have suggested to senior citizens to get involved with others in the form of social activities and lead a healthy lifestyle which will eventually solve the problems of isolation and body fitness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, consequently, first, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2201.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 433.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0831408776 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65275847213 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517321016166 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 695.7 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9834456309 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.277777778 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0555555556 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213775166506 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687278982397 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424003534822 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130632160696 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446584733919 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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