Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Every child loves to play with toys and generally, parents are eager to gift toys to their little kid. Having lots of toy are a blessing, as a child gets the chance to play with various items and additionally, they get to know about various colors of different objects. However, giving many options can be harmful for a kid as they cannot concentrate on one particular games for long time. I believe that limited toy options are beneficial for little kid.
Having the opportunity to play with multiple games is always a fun for young boys or girls. For example, playing with a car for long time may be boring but if there are options to play with dolls then it may be funny. Therefore, it is important to have varieties of toys to make the moment enjoyable for little players.
In addition, by playing different types of games, a child can learn about different colors. For instance, a toy car’s color may be red whereas a doll’s color may be green, blue etc. All these colors can create different impact on young mind which important for proper mental development.
On the flip side, many toys can make a negative impact on young mind, such as, for having alternatives, a child unlikely to play with single toys. This psychological change is not good for mental development because in the long run, they may become too unstable to complete a single task.
In conclusion, it seems that, occasion to play with many toys may create some haphazard on young mind. But, a child should pass their time playing with colorful toys which is expected by every parents. In my opinion, there should be a balance about the amount of toys which a father and a mother can maintain for the better mental growth of their little angel.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47405262514 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519607843137 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1009634925 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.2 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259814834165 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108675613435 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466302034962 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167019286933 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522271718739 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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