It is argued that children's free time has to be related with their education, if not, it should not be assumed beneficial and their time will pass with huge emptiness. This essay will disaagree with this idea, because children must be relax and enjoy their holiday times with only some entertainment and also they need to be more sociable during their leisure time. This ideas will be explained in the following sentences below.
Fistly, children need to spend their leisure time with entertainment. They can play various games or listen different types of music or just lay down and sleep at home. For example, in my childhood we were playing to much games during our summer holidays and after we came back to school, we were full of energy and more eager to learn new subjects.
Secondly, leisure or holiday time is a great opportunity for the children to build strong friendships and learn to behave in a society. Parents can give them some social responsibilities and they can help even to old people. For instance, my elder brother and me were carrying our old neighbours market packages from market till to their house and then we were proud of ourselves.
In conclusion, this essay indicates that children must spend their leisure time with entertainment and trying to become more sociable in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 367, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...ore sociable during their leisure time. This ideas will be explained in the followin...
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Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...xample, in my childhood we were playing to much games during our summer holidays a...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ple, in my childhood we were playing to much games during our summer holidays and af...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89732142857 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55958566855 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584821428571 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.238147619 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.7 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162324422113 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715871287145 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408493028351 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100225020347 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294003026704 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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