Some people believe that children s leisure activities must be educational otherwise they are a complete waste of time Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience

Earth is the one and only planet,where we can find all equipment that helps a human being for live.air,water,soil and many types of suitable things exist in Earth.earth is our mother.A mother always try to make her children good and healthy.she gives us many facilities so that we can take a fresh breathe,can eat healthy food and helps us to make new invention.Earth have oxygen, comes from tress.nobody can breathe without it.Earth have mounts,oceans and lands.lands helps us to grow food.ocean is called the lungs of earth.various types of places are in earth,some of them are able to find by human.other side some places exist in earth which is unknown and human ever unable to find it.but those places,we find,have a gorgeous look which makes us enjoyable.there are various types of people's,religions,county's in this planet.by travelling,we can improve our knowledge about nature.

Come to the point,this essay is about the activities of people that causes harm of earth.in the early,when human being aren't exist in earth,she had everything and as always she have.but human create a great change in nature.our nature have two types of beauty.one is sympathetic and other is rude.she can be sympathetic if we give her sympathy. Otherwise she can become rude.

From the revolution of industry,nature being weak.man made invention are suitable for us but not for nature.it makes our life easy but stand opposite to earth.I would love to say something that industry revolution create some problems between earth and human.first,from that revolution human use their knowledge making some new.that's why,industrial activities increasing and people lost their lands.the growth of food are loosing and it cause the lack of food.similar people lost their shelter. Second is so many Mills,factories polluted the environments.today people can't find pure water for drink and new diseases are born by polluted water.todays air isn't fresh.the earth sky is covered by black smoke which cames from vehicles and from Mills.childrens,older people's are the main victim of pollution.many diseases are born that create a terrible destruction of human.third is,people cutting forests randomly. We know that trees gives us oxygen and take carbon-dy-oxide.but unconsciously we makes a great mistake by cutting trees.carbon-dy-oxide,nitrogen,sulphur and so many harmful gases increasing terribly. Ozone gas destruct the atmosphere. Today's world is covered full of dirty.here there we find waste.that ruin our whole nature. All of this reason are responsible for greenhouse gas and we are responsible for this destruction. Nature become very rude and strong.for pollution earth create a lot of changes.natural demonstration are increasing such as flood,thunder,tsunami,tornado,acid rain and a lot.

It's unexplainable that how we ruin ourselves!how we spoiling our mother earth!if we can't be conscious from today,in the future,we will no more!

Votes
Average: 6.7 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , industrial
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Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, third, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 24.0651302605 237% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2482.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 448.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54017857143 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.02501099235 2.80592935109 143% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 756.0 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 245.154631587 49.4020404114 496% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 225.636363636 106.682146367 212% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.7272727273 20.7667163134 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0956662717923 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399002387786 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301331662024 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604329833092 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299887040655 0.056905535591 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.0 13.0946893788 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.74 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , where
Earth is the one and only planet,where we can find all equipment that helps a ...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , water
...nt that helps a human being for live.air,water,soil and many types of suitable things ...
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Suggestion: A
...ings exist in Earth.earth is our mother.A mother always try to make her children ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , can
...ties so that we can take a fresh breathe,can eat healthy food and helps us to make n...
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Message: Use simply 'invention'.
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...ledge about nature. Come to the point,this essay is about the activities of people...
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^^^^^^^^^
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...r life easy but stand opposite to earth.I would love to say something that indust...
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Suggestion: , from
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Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , industrial
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Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
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Line 5, column 505, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...lar people lost their shelter. Second is so many Mills,factories polluted the env...
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Line 5, column 520, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , factories
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...ution.many diseases are born that create a terrible destruction of human.third is...
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Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...ke carbon-dy-oxide.but unconsciously we makes a great mistake by cutting trees.carbon...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...!how we spoiling our mother earth!if we cant be conscious from today,in the future,w...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...earth!if we cant be conscious from today,in the future,we will no more!
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Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...nt be conscious from today,in the future,we will no more!
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, third, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 24.0651302605 237% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2482.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 448.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54017857143 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.02501099235 2.80592935109 143% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 756.0 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 245.154631587 49.4020404114 496% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 225.636363636 106.682146367 212% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.7272727273 20.7667163134 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0956662717923 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399002387786 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301331662024 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604329833092 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299887040655 0.056905535591 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.0 13.0946893788 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.74 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.