Some people believe that educational success depends on good teachers Others think that it s depends on the attitude of the students Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Some people believe that educational success depends on good teachers. Others think that it’s depends on the attitude of the students. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Teaching is considered as noble profession because teachers play a huge role in everybody’s life. To which, it is believed by some people that effectiveness of study is depends on the quality of teaches while others believe that it is the perspective of students that matter the most. In my opinion, neither of them alone is efficient, it requires equal and active involvement from both parties to justify the quality of education.

To Begin with, a good teacher always has a great impact on the mind of their students. As a student, people learn enormous things about the life from their teachers, not only the syllabus but also the attitude about the life. Moreover, a better teacher has the power to plant seeds of curiosity, which one of the crucial attribute to learn something new, and set the course of their lives. For instance, MIT is widely popular because of its world-class professors. On the contrary, some teachers who are not that good teaching affect children so deeply that they lose interest in those subjects for the lifetime. Thus, the significance of standard teacher is crystal clear.

However, the perception of receiver is equally crucial to call schooling a success. It does not matter how effective is one as a teacher, if their pupils are with no intention to learn or study, the teaching will be useless. The number of dropouts from the Howard is a clear example of the situation. On the other hand, attentive and aware students can make up for poor quality teachers by self-study without any supervision, which is very essential for success in the future. Thus, willingness to study is also very important for better learning experience.

In conclusion, Teachers and students are the two sides of the same coin and therefore active and positive participation is the key to successful teaching rather than blaming anyone alone.

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Average: 9.1 (24 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 548, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
...also very important for better learning experience. In conclusion, Teachers and student...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7742935084 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580128205128 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0780170801 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142774499655 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419129170837 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555257676829 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825127354416 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633916617769 0.056905535591 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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