Some people believe that the government should ban dangerous sporting activities, while others think that people should have the freedom to do whatever sports they choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Adventures sports have been in vogue in last one decade and people get utmost satisfaction post completion. It has negative side as well so some people believe that government should have control on these kinds of sports and impose ban if required. I believe that choice should be given to people to play these games or not.
People who think that dangerous games should be banned have some valid arguments. First and foremost, playing these games is risky and prone to inflict injuries or sometimes may be fatal. It is generally seen that adventures games do not have strict guidelines and people are unaware about the security precautions they should take while playing such games. For instance, river rafting is common adventures sports but does not have international body which reviews the guidelines in timely manner. Also, most of the adventures games require costly accessories in order to protect the enthusiast, consequently, some people involve in games without necessary guards and suffer invariably.
However, some people take pride to carry out activities full of risks and enjoy these moments. Human nature is to discover new things and set challenge for themselves for getting feeling of accomplishment. Adventures people develop a skill to come-over the difficulties in high time and such skills help them in handling the real life situation. For instance, virgin Atlantic airlines CEO took the balloon ride to cover the Atlantic Ocean and on completion, he mentioned that similar attitude also reflects in taking business decision. Besides, dangerous games develop self-dependence as these are played mostly in difficult conditions and members have to do all things on its own.
To conclude, though, dangerous games have risk of injury or life, teach different lesson of life and develop confidence to face the uncertainties of life. Government should allow people to choose the game they want to play.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24675324675 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73748089544 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61038961039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9912270575 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.733333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290218846934 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111421529187 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100320968794 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192362716152 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943510189321 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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