Some people believe that the government should pay for and offer housing to people who lost their homes or cannot afford them. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion. Use specific reasons and examples to support it.
The role of the government is to provide different facilities to citizen and help them when required. Accommodation is needed by everyone and it is seen that some people are not able to afford the house or lost the residential owing to natural calamities. Some people believe that it is the responsibility of the government to provide shelter to homeless people. I also support that homeless should be taken care by the administration.
People who hold the view that individuals should be held responsible for their houses have some valid points. Firstly, building house require lots of money and if number of people are higher for availing such kind of service then there will be lot of financial burden on government and other welfare schemes may get hampered. For instance, in African countries, government provides the shelter to poor people but can’t provide the health services because of lack of funds. Secondly, knowing that government will take care of the residence, it will make the people lazy and people may not prefer to work hard as their basic needs are being fulfilled by government.
However, people believe that house is one of the basic necessities for human and person do not have, citing any reasons must be helped by the administration in form of building the house or make appropriate payment. There are so many nations where people live under poverty lines and hardly get food for family. In such scenario, thinking about house is a far distant dream and they spend most of their life in temporary accommodation or living on street in dilapidated conditions. It becomes mandatory for government to provide suitable house for weaker section of society. Furthermore, a natural disaster sometimes devastates cities or community and leaves nothing. As a result, lots of people become deserted and require enormous help to rehabilitate. For example, recent hurricane swept the whole Caribbean island and destroyed properties. Only way to reconstruct their house is to provide help by local government and international aid.
To sum-up, though individuals may be asked to take care of their residential requirement, poor and homeless people must be facilitated a place to live in order to live the life with dignity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...people believe that house is one of the basic necessities for human and person do not have, citin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11989100817 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86216923168 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542234332425 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4390521387 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.529411765 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5882352941 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27117847889 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911510118628 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537951341885 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16435271564 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670745275728 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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