Some people believe that the government should spend money on art and education. Others say most schools should be privately funded. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Schools everywhere operate on the basic mechanisms of private fundings or government contributions. Some people believe the former system to be better, while others prefer the latter. I personally believe a combined system should be followed; nevertheless, this debatable topic shall further be clarified in this essay.
With education being now considered as a fundamental right, it is the duty of the government to spend for better education and art facilities for students. However, as it is widely observed, government funded institutions generally lack in quality of adequate faculty and infrastructure. This is because public education is the single largest expenditure for state and local governments for many countries. It is quite obvious that the government cannot provide education to all on its own.
Privately funded institutions for education and art are more popular as they are equipped with very good infrastructure, presentable faculty members and abundant facilities for children. This they provide, against the exorbitant amount of fees the parents pay. Many times it is observed that these private schools monopolize the sector and may even cut corners in terms of providing best quality teaching. Therefore even private institutions aren’t completely flawless.
In my opinion, the government should set aside a specific budget for art and education and should get involved with the private institutions in order to regulate their framework. This amalgamation can reduce the fees of private schools to a considerable extent which can enable even people of limited means to give their children a chance at better education.
Therefore, to conclude, neither fully private nor completely government funded institutions are the best for educating the children. Partially being funded by both the bodies can help build a better system of schooling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 374, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'providing the best'.
Suggestion: providing the best
...or and may even cut corners in terms of providing best quality teaching. Therefore even privat...
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Line 5, column 407, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...rms of providing best quality teaching. Therefore even private institutions aren’t comple...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59298245614 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03364939045 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571929824561 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.183670068 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.266666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323815795445 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103192999255 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574259795057 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178437112123 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565192582906 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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