Some people believe that homework should not be given to students. But other people believe that homework should be given to students. Explain both the views and also give your opinion.
Homework is a task given by teachers to students to revise their academic work at home. Hometask is a tradition that has been carried on from ages. There are many people who believe that homework should not be given to learners while others are in favour of giving home assignments. I am going to explain both the views in following paragraphs as well as my own opinion.
There are plethora of reasons for not giving hometasks to pupils. One of them is that childern do not get time to spend with their family members as they are burdened with lots of homework so they do not share their feelings, problems with their parents and are living stressful life. They become self-centered as they do not get socialise. Due to lack of time, they are not able to perform outdoor or other recreational activities hence they are sufferring from various health issues like obesity. Students are spending most of their time in doing home assignments, they remain binded to their academic subjects rather than studing other books, novels or magazines and they become bookworms who are having knowledge of their subjects but are not aware of what is happening around them, which new technologies are emerging, which new experiments are performed by scientist etctera. Even they do not get time to invest on their hobbies or brain storming activities so they are not able to explore their interest which they may adopt as their career.
Some parents are in favour of giving homework to learners because in this way they revise their subjects and pass examinations with good grades which helps them to get a good job in future. Another reason is if lots of homeassignments are given to children then they remain busy with their work and stay at home so they do not get time to go out and roam around with friends, in this way they stay away from bad company as well as bad habits.
In conclusion, i would like to say that homework should not be given to pupils so that they can spend time with their parents or friends so that they can become socialize and can share their feelings with them. They get time to perform their hobbies which can help them to become creative or can adopt them as their career. Students are builders of our nation so we have to care about them for the sake of our country. I am not saying that no hometasks should be given to students but it should be given in less amount or teachers should give some time to them to complete their homeassignments at school itself so that they can get time to invest in other curriculum-activities.
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...s well as bad habits. In conclusion, i would like to say that homework should ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 63.0 24.0651302605 262% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2102.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 453.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64017660044 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55335780461 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441501103753 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 644.4 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.562455389 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.375 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3125 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164094518484 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764571504523 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11475507724 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153663145911 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137124791529 0.056905535591 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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