It is said that people in today’s world are often overwhelmed with options. Although I agree that being surrounded by information sometimes can lead to wrong decisions, I do not believe that the issue is alarming.
On the one hand, there is no disputing the fact that more businesses, schools, facilities, etc. are rising than ever before due to the innovation of information and technology, which can result in people being bombarded with information and options. Making a decision now is time-consuming and frustrating because of the availabilities of products and services in the market. For example, while in the past the milkman delivered your milk in the morning and that is the only source of milk, dozens of new types of milk from hundreds of brands have been introduced in recent years making the market more competitive than ever.
On the other hand, there is a host of advantages to having many options. Firstly, the more choices we have the more competitive the market is. Consequently, consumers benefit from better products as well as services, which in turn, contribute to the growth of the economy. Secondly, the range of products varies widely will create accessibility for all types of consumers in different income brackets. For instance, the poor in Vietnam has now been able to fly with the newly established airline providing cheap tickets and short distances flights. Therefore, the competition between companies and convenience makes it beneficial to have many choices.
In conclusion, while I agree that too many preferences might lead to waste of time and effort, I would argue that the merits of it are significant.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13703703704 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94183438942 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585185185185 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.276272245 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.692307692 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131651023018 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463749787776 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471334140084 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839949884054 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033449065756 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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