Some people believe that in order for the hobby to be enjoyable it needs to be difficult in some ways.
Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, people are more inclined towards opting past time activities of their interest. Some people believe that such activities should be difficult in nature to derive enjoyment. In my opinion, although challenging hobbies are an excellent way for people to have fun, I believe that relaxing hobbies are more popular as they help in alleviating people’s stress.
One of the significant advantages of learning a strenuous hobby is that these activities often make the learning experience enjoyable. This is because people can develop skills of their interest in an environment that is outside their work-place. For instance, one study by Adobe company found that professionals who were indulged in photography as their past-time activity took their best shots in the worst weather conditions. Consequently, an increasing number of people have fun learning in the worst circumstances, which are both challenging and motivating.
Nevertheless, it is vital to consider the impact of hobbies in the presence of growing economies of scale and increasing work-place competition. The reason for this is leisure and relaxation, which are the indisputable catalysts for drive and motivation. Thus, in turn, persuade people to undertake a certain kind of hobby. For example, one of the studies by Wallstreet researchers found that employees who listened to music daily were able to cope up with the work stress quickly than their co-office counterparts who did not. As a result, hobbies that require less physical and mental efforts might be enjoyable for those who find difficulties in striking work-life balance. Conversely, if people are overloaded with work and opt for challenging hobbies, then the chances of its survival will be very meager.
In conclusion, although challenging hobbies supply with an excellent opportunity for a fun-filled learning experience, I feel that past time activities that aid in alleviating stress levels are more prefered by busy communities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, if, nevertheless, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51803278689 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08563785598 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583606557377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5653040664 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.214285714 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209289021684 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767189119 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775475382896 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126975247807 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088232823828 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.