Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning.
In your opinion, what does success come from?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is desire of an every person to be successful in life. While there are those who are of the belief that success comes from taking risks, others hold that success is the outcome of careful planning. This essay will discuss both the views before arriving at a conclusion.
Taking risks or chances, on the one hand, it is expedient method of becoming successful speedly, to cite an example, people engage themselves in fatal sports like car racing, invest huge sums of money in the big companies to become famous and rich overnight.It is greater the risks, it is said the bigger the reward, however, as the world, risks it implies risky ventures need not always be safe when they fail, they could be devastating to the risk takers such as success need not always come from by taking risks.
On the other hand, careful planning can bring success, although the award brought by such means would not be important , it had better be admitted that it is safe and sound for instance, since no chances are taken and made , success is ushered it is the wise who follow this way for getting success in life.
In conclusion, in the final analysis those who are daring and ambitious to become successful fast take risk.Although, it is profitable sometimes, failure can be equally destructive. Therefore, the more thoughtful people prefer to schedule their steps carefully so that the chances to end up to peral to minimal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79183673469 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51104854239 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616326530612 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.537108902 49.4020404114 303% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 167.714285714 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8571428571 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282156580663 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131389738594 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107680566727 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173735747534 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07233104242 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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