Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Giving children proper formal education should be top priority. Few people think that home schooling is perfect for nurturing a child, whereas, some other people think it's crucial for children to get schooled. Homeschooling and going to school to learn, both are popular nowadays. Even though this is the case, I strongly believe that children must go to school to become competent in life.
On the one hand, teaching children at home is gaining more momentum because children can be taught one on one. Parents, themselves are the teachers and hence children secure maximum attention throughout the learning process. Errors and mistakes are rectified then and there and children acquire a sharp progress in their academics. Also, parents can identify their child’s extra talents and skills and encourage them. A home schooled boy in Chennai, India won world recognition for extraordinary performance on keyboard. Moreover, the comfort to study and learn new things at home bestows relief to children. Parents can also avoid the unnecessary haste, in order to get their children to and from school.
On the other hand, classroom learning gives the opportunity to children for thorough development. Children are taught the basics of conduct such as sharing, caring, waiting for turns, and empathy which are most important for character building. Also, interacting with other children, dusts away their fear and anxiety and transforms them into better humans. A recent study by Cambridge University showed 89% out of 100 children who actually went to schools did better in life.It is often observed that, children who are often shy and reserved during their kindergarten become more active and dynamic in higher classes.
In conclusion, even if some people think teaching children at home is best, others think children should be sent to school to learn. School taught children, gain more life skills and succeed in their career as well. So it is necessary for children to learn lessons from school.
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Suggestion: sharp progress
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Message: Did you mean 'to'?
Suggestion: to
...necessary for children to learn lessons from school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, hence, if, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26791277259 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57881085548 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595015576324 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4714323677 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9444444444 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386314851387 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129716361491 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883154700062 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273469190747 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739983107541 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.