Some people believe they should keep all the they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree.
Long before, each country’s government has brought comprehensive taxation system. The system was formed in such a way that the government can eventually disburse funds via various policies, to the needed citizens. However, some people believe that they should keep all the hard earned money without paying taxes and save as much amount as possible. Despite this belief by the most, I strongly support the notion to pay taxes. Two strong reasons to hold on this belief are: government financially supports minority people or society which is in dire needs, the government also supports to improve infrastructure of respective nation.
Most of the people are in a dilemma that what the governments are doing with all these taxation money. In fact, it has been introducing various policies for different sectors such as health insurance, property related policies, and other policies related to natural catastrophes. When any of this predicament occurs either to individuals, to the society and or to the specific region then the government can utilize this funds to recover losses. For example, the American government keeps taxation money as their treasury resource and helps individuals by disbursing partial amount while they are ill. Additionally, the government also helps economically backward classes to pay some fixed amount to survive. Finally, this fund has been utilizing when any natural calamities happen, just to recover the loss of property and infrastructure.
Taxation money can be used to improve the overall infrastructure of the nation. All the government is using taxation's money to build public facilities like government hospitals, recreational centers, and many others. The government also using this money to provide better transportation facilities to the citizens. For example, the Indian government is managing and fulfilling the country’s citizens’ needs from this monetary resource. This resource is actually the sum of the individuals' tax submission. So, ultimately people are getting their money back as the facilities which are provided by the government.
To conclude, paying taxes is not only one’s responsibility but also their duty towards the nation. People having this mindset should take all this into consideration, otherwise, days are numbered that the government would not offer any of the support to their countrymen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this taxation' or 'these taxations'?
Suggestion: this taxation; these taxations
...what the governments are doing with all these taxation money. In fact, it has been introducing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, however, if, so, then, while, as for, for example, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57417582418 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03309020892 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541208791209 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9564391325 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.789473684 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1578947368 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164176065822 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561089654289 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10025281436 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113439115627 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609221210093 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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