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Television plays a pivotal role in man’s life. Some people believe that it can encourage people to be more active.On the other hand, some people opine that there are better ways to encourage them. In the present essay, I intend to discuss that the advantages of watching sport programs outweigh its disadvantages.
It is often suggested that watching sport competitions on TV is meritorious for two fundamental reasons.For one thing, it provides people with a useful way by which they can get more knowledge and information about specific sports.For instance, in much of the world, there are many TV programs that render some points about sports.Another thing is that, not only the boob tube can entertain people for more hours but it also can improve their standards of living. As an illustration, imagine a thirty year old man who tries to copy how players are dressed.The more he watches television, the more he becomes well-bred.
By contrast, there are several serious disadvantages to watching sport races on the tube.In the first place, television turns people into coach potatoes. An example may help clarify the point. It has a long -lasting impression on user’s habits.In the second place, it may lead to a serious medical condition.All in all,Many people suffer from various diseases such as weak sightseeing or poor concentration.
By comparing and contrasting the positive and negative sides of watching sport matches on TV, I personally think that its plus side is considerably more significant than its downside. To support my position, I would like to offer two different but complementary arguments. Firstly, Doctor William Austin, the head of sport department at Oxford university asserts that although television is a matter of controversy, in Japan, many adults have become more energetic and enthusiastic by following too much TV. The latest figures released by Ministry of Health (MH) revealed that 70% of adults have made improvements to their capacities and skills through viewing TV programs regarding matches.
On the basis of the above, it can be concluded that the tube can be more beneficial to encourage people to do more exercise. However, the question is: Can watching TV improve the health and happiness of people in general? Only time will tell, but in the meantime, it continues to influence every aspect of our daily lives.There is hope that the government provide financial support for broadcasters to shoot high quality programs. They can take cost-cutting measures to develop thee quality of their programs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, thus, well, another thing, for instance, in general, such as, for one thing, in the first place, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2167.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27250608273 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95358288941 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593673965937 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.8916719525 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.4375 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6875 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6875 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340369999204 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911581269632 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872250511267 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175452877838 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756899071558 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.