Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
At present, human beings are consuming more meat and fish when compared to few decades ago. Due to the recent study suggests that some poultry farms are breeding their animals with artificial medicines which are hazardous to our health. For this reason, some people prefer to eat no meat and fish to prevent them from life threatening illness. In the following passage, I will explain both the views and share my opinion.
Firstly, a study at Oxford University suggests that animals are cruelly killed which triggers hormones which causes many diseases among human beings. Secondly, kids are becoming obese when they eat meat produced using artificial medicines. . For instance, my friend's kid regularly eat chicken, within few months he has gained double the weight and doctor suggested to stop eating chicken for sometime. Finally, for these reasons, it has been believed that people to prefer to no meat and fish as part of their diet to prevent them from dangerous diseases.
On the flip side, some doctor suggests to intake red meat with people who are suffering from low Vitamin B12 deficiency. Additionally, some fish has oil which lowers bad fat from our body. However, some endangered species such turtles and rhinoceros are cruelly traded for meat across countries, this trend will cause a threat to their survival on our plant. Therefore, some doctors say eating meat and fish is not considered to be unhealthy, but consuming more will invite unwanted illness to our body.
In conclusion, usages of unwanted medicines by some poultry companies have instigated many people to eat only vegetarian foods. Hence, in my view eating vegetarian foods are good for our lives which contain enough nutrients to our body.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: TO_TOO
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
...suming more meat and fish when compared to few decades ago. Due to the recent stud...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
...at produced using artificial medicines. . For instance, my friends kid regularly ...
Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested stopping'.
Suggestion: suggested stopping
...has gained double the weight and doctor suggested to stop eating chicken for sometime. Finally, f...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11307420495 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46254173231 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604240282686 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4133891901 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.357142857 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245670331067 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886192859797 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629178499574 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157857349532 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038483574377 0.056905535591 68% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.