Some people consider art to be essential and others think it is not. Which view do you agree with and why?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The art has been an integral part of people's lives for quite a long time. However, while some people believe that it is not that important for them, a vast majority of people consider it as a necessity. I strongly believe in this fact that art plays an important role in our lives. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons for my opinion with relevant examples.
To start with, a piece of visual art is really helpful in learning visualization skills, such as the analysis of paintings, and the identification of individuals. Nevertheless, it helps people in capturing historical photographs and learning new techniques. Drawing pictures of imagination are one of the popular arts. Even though there is a less number of visual artists at present, many sculptures have been built by our ancestors, which are widely popular over the world. In many museums, for instance, historical paintings are displayed for the public to encourage them about art.
Performing art is very popular among people, which represents their culture and old beliefs. Moreover, classical dances and plays are widely performed over the world in different religions. These are mainly for entertainment based on ancient beliefs. Nowadays, for example, classical dances are popularly performed by young artists at theatres and at opera houses.
Last, but not least, the literature is also one of the popular arts, which is widely recognized for learning new skills in poetry and drama. There are many old novels and biographies written by our ancestors, which are widely known for learning poetry skills. Many writers, for instance, are started following classical poetry and old stories to make their books more interesting.
To sum up, we should consider art to be an integral part of our lives rather ignoring it. Furthermore, the arts could be used to learn about our culture and old values.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15635179153 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75820571304 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560260586319 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4849302375 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.9444444444 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152258435572 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508894765444 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365612934369 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871799543353 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425886254665 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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