Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours.
In your letter
-explain the reasons for the noise
-apologise
-describe what action you will take
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am extremely disappointed reading your letter on problems which you are facing due to the high volume of the music played at my home. As you already know, I have two kids, who are very naughty, and they like to play Music system at a high volume. But, they are not aware that it is creating problems for neighbors. I personally believe that it should not happen, because it is not gentleness and against the society rules and regulations.
I would like to apologize for the disturbance created by my children. I assure you that it would not happen again. If you would have informed me earlier then I could have resolved this issue at that time. Again, I am really sorry about the problems faced by you and your family.
Furthermore, I will disconnect my television connection immediately. It will resolve your problem. Also, it would help my kids to concentrate on their studies rather than wasting time on watching television. Nevertheless, I will explain to them about the situation, so that they would avoid creating any kind of problematic noise.
I am looking forward to making a great relationship with you in the coming future.
Yours sincerely,
Matt Henry
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 71, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the disturbance created by my children. I assure you that it would not happen aga...
^
Line 9, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ure you that it would not happen again. If you would have informed me earlier then...
^^
Line 9, column 123, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had informed'?
Suggestion: had informed
... that it would not happen again. If you would have informed me earlier then I could have resolved t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 154, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
.... If you would have informed me earlier then I could have resolved this issue at tha...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, really, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90731707317 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74155889079 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.933683249 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8571428571 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6428571429 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222686555105 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814654875721 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713926043168 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114293970787 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044618761389 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.