An art gallery in your town is looking for volunteers to work in the gallery at the weekends. You would like to do some work in the art gallery in your free time.
Write a letter to the art gallery. In your letter
explain why you would like to do unpaid work in the gallery
say what type of unpaid work you could do
give details about when you will be available for this work
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to show my interest in volunteer work at City art gallery at the weekends. I have been involved in many kinds of public activities for the last few years. The main reason for my participation is that I feel happy when I help people in any way. Also, I have some experience in handling sculptures at an old monument in the past.
Furthermore, I am capable of doing any kind of work-related to the gallery. When I participated in the art and craft exhibition last year, I could able to explain sculptures history to visitors. So, I am looking forward to handling the same kind of responsibility this year as well. I would only be interested in unpaid work because the culture is something which is very close to my heart.
Generally, I go to the office from Monday to Friday, and I am free on Saturday and Sunday. On weekends, I can come from morning 8:00 AM till 8:00 PM. Moreover, if it is required to stay longer, I would be more than happy to stretch it up to 10:00 PM. Nevertheless, I can come on weekdays as well in case of any emergency, but I can come only after my office hours. My office timings are from 9:00 AM to 5:00 PM.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely.
Matt Henry
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, i feel, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37974683544 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70527649092 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582278481013 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2729915422 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1428571429 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 4.34317383033 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204329374122 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615735327291 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664033599101 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109383853169 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061526569137 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.