Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others believe those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The new structure of building in the metropolitan is supported by many people who spend money on them, whereas on the other side of the picture, many people believe that authorities should take action against them and guide them according to the situation of the city. According to my point of view, I would support government intervention in the construction of buildings because it affects the cities in many ways.
One commonly cited reason for authority inference in construction is symmetry view megacities. As big cities represent the countries culture and tradition in every way in the form of building, roads, and parks; therefore, the government should guide the construction department to have symmetrical structure, such as in commercial area, someone should not have right to make a house between the superstores.
Furthermore, the government has complete knowledge about the city area and it makes a plan according to the availability of space. Some places are specified for the parks, museums, and markets; however, other places are used for residential areas. In this way, with the same structure of the house, anyone can be easily
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 123, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...megacities. As big cities represent the countries culture and tradition in every way in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 185.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21081081081 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93568756933 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643243243243 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.5185645589 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.714285714 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241805830713 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916983401303 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465508391386 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141278891854 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454032198859 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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