Celebrities such as movie stars, sportsmen and musicians generally earn a large sum of money for the services they do. It has been believed some people that these stars are being overpaid considering the necessity of the job they do. I too believe that the sum these people make in such a short-term is too high and there are people those who do other jobs in the country that are critical for the welfare of the people.
Why are personalities belong to the entertainment industry are paid higher salaries? One of the major reason is the fame that stars have, helps business people to create a huge market for their movies or products that they launch across the globe. It can be argued that stars put in a lot of hard work and they have to face tremendous competition to reach the top position in the industry in which they work in. So this achievement naturally rewards them with fortunes. In addition to that people say that this popularity is only short-lived as the newcomers will come soon and replace them during the course of the period. For example, sportsmen are expected to retire in their mid-thirties and movie stars and musicians face threats as and when the energetic new entrants are spotted in the limelight.
However, there are other professions which are more significant for the development and welfare of the nation and its citizens and are historically paid very less. For examples services that are provided by teachers, nurses and military men are making an inevitable contribution to the countries literacy growth, well being of the citizens and security to the nation as a whole. I believe that providing them with better packages will encourage and motivates them to stay in the profession for long-run and contribute for fellow citizens growth and well-being.
In conclusion, though there are arguments put forth by that support the higher-earning of celebrities seems to make them valid, considering that there are no value additions to the public, I personally believe they are overpaid than what they deserve. On top of that, the government shall take into consideration the importance of professions such as teaching and nursing, must take the necessary action to ensure their better living in the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 288, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[2]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
... that the sum these people make in such a short-term is too high and there are people those ...
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Line 3, column 592, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
...wcomers will come soon and replace them during the course of the period. For example, sportsmen are ...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...aking an inevitable contribution to the countries literacy growth, well being of the citi...
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Line 5, column 530, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
... for long-run and contribute for fellow citizens growth and well-being. In conclusion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96286472149 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74282613673 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527851458886 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.5384822586 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.642857143 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9285714286 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146747570071 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545756482267 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591249814762 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860025696022 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788336755247 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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