Some people feel unsafe when they are in public and at home. What are the possible causes of this and what are some possible solutions?
Certain individuals have an opnion that they are prone to danger such as robbery and kidnapping not only at their house but also outside. This essay will discuss the causes associated with unsfe environment and suggest the viable solutions.
The causes for the increase in criminal activities such as murder, kidnapping and robbery is firstly mot of people are below the poverty line that is they dont have enough money to fulfil their basic need such as food, clothing and shelther. Thus they indulge into wrongful activities to earn enough money for meeting their needs. Secondly, criminal activities are increasing because of lack of basic education. Individuals do not posses the required skills and knowledge for working in a company of starting their own business, as a result they opt for althernae methods for earning money such as killing someone for cash and so on. All these causes has made the society always worried about their security and safety. To elucidate, according to the recent study India is ranked in 10th position for the most unsafe place to live because of criminal activities.
The solutions to these causes os that governemt of nation should provide free school education to all people so that they posses the basic knowledge and experience which will aid them in starting their own small scale business or to work in any company and thus earn money for their requirement. Furthermore, their should not be any income disparity. Salary and basic remuneration must be equally distributed among all the people irrespective of their education degree. This will help reduce poverty among people. All the aforementioned solutions will help to reduce the crime rate in the country and thus peace and harmony will prevail. To exemplify, many non-profit organisations are working towards providing education to children and adoloscents in order to increase the literacy rate.
To conclude, the main causes of increase in crime is poor and illetrate people and this can be solved by providin them with good job opportunities and basic school education. It is recommended that governemnt should motivate people to study and enhance their knowledhge as this will aid in decreasing the crime rate in country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15426997245 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66218631886 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517906336088 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.383797675 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.9375 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6875 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103617341284 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03666362222 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024300758289 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729745352973 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137713466922 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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