Some people prefer to live in a house , while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment ?
Being a controversial subject among people, whether or not living in a private house outweights being settled in an apartment. In this essay, I will describe both pros and cons of two way of living of most resident.
To begin with, there are some benefit from living a house, and one of them is the huge space. People who lives in a house is given more space than living in the apartment. So, it can create enough privacy for each person to do anything they want to do because of not having a share area with other household, such as staircases and corridors. Moreover, most houses on the street come with separate garages and it will benefit for each people if they live in this place. Despite having some positive aspect, possessing a house could harm the financial condition as they have to pay a lot of fee including mortage, property taxes, home inspections.
On the other hand, staying in an apartment can bring up both positive and negative aspect for each resident in a city. First, renting an apartment may be benificial for any people to find any kind of amenities so that they can satisfy their basic needs, such as recreational spots and covenience stores. Second, many appartment provides offer homes with modern upgrades, so moving into an urban apartment complex can grant you new lifestyle changes. Although there have some beneficial aspect for any citizen, living in an apartment provide less space than with a house so you might consider your space in it when allocating to any flat in the building.
To conclude, it is a great argument when talking about choose where to live in a house or apartment. However, I strongly believe that we might think about both pros and cons of living in these places before making a decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, kind of, such as, talking about, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73529411765 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50668080808 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584967320261 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3475233148 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.461538462 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376847092552 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143105851792 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100244828663 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215805935132 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449222918275 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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