Some people prefer to live in the same place most of their life, but others like to live in different places .Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today's competitive era, people have to roam from one place to another for different reasons. It is an observation that some people prefer to live in the same place for most of their life while others enjoy to live in various places. However, It is said that change is inevitable for the growth. Hence, roaming to different places is beneficial rather to settle at one place for entire life.
World is the combination of different type of people where some people are very introvert by nature. They can not get adjusted with the place, environment and people easily. It took long time for them to get settled at different place. Hence, they prefer to spend their entire life at single place. Moreover, There are array of reasons to remain at one place. Many a time the attachment to the place, satisfaction with the life and ancestor bonding play a pivotal role behind stillness of person. To illustrate , there are many royal families who are still residing in their old palaces due to the emotional attachment with the place.
On the flip side, there are people who are highly ambitious in their life who love to explore different places for their personal growth and knowledge enhancement. For instance , In today's competitive era, students have to go abroad to learn new subjects and technologies. Roaming different places will not only increase their knowledge but also provide competitive edge to their personality. Nowadays , businesses also become multinational which demands constant transfer of their employees. So, if person is flexible and enthusiastic, he will have ample of opportunity for career and personal growth.
All in all, I strongly believe that stillness can restrict person's growth and development. So, In my opinion one should be always welcome change in their life.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 161 200 //it means the essay is not outstanding.
We are expecting:
No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
to reach 7.5 or over.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 297 350
No. of Characters: 1461 1500
No. of Different Words: 161 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.151 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.919 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.604 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 107 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 71 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.156 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.611 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.31 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.502 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.091 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy living'.
Suggestion: enjoy living
...ace for most of their life while others enjoy to live in various places. However, It is said ...
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Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'arrays'?
Suggestion: arrays
...fe at single place. Moreover, There are array of reasons to remain at one place. Many...
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Line 3, column 511, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ehind stillness of person. To illustrate , there are many royal families who are ...
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Line 3, column 534, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. To illustrate , there are many royal families who are still residing in their...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and knowledge enhancement. For instance , In todays competitive era, students hav...
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Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...petitive era, students have to go abroad to learn new subjects and technologies. ...
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Line 5, column 403, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tive edge to their personality. Nowadays , businesses also become multinational wh...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... always welcome change in their life.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'while', 'for instance', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244712990937 0.247107183377 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.141993957704 0.155533422707 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105740181269 0.0946595960268 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0513595166163 0.0501214627716 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0543806646526 0.0437548338989 124% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12084592145 0.122226691241 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0151057401813 0.0403226058552 37% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.67817516646 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0483383685801 0.0326793684256 148% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0543806646526 0.0861772015684 63% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0151057401813 0.021408717616 71% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0151057401813 0.011925033212 127% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1812.0 1933.35771543 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 316.048096192 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.04 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.383333333333 0.374742101984 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25 0.28420135186 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176666666667 0.203846283523 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116666666667 0.137316102897 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67817516646 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.037074148 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.56093040696 96% => OK
Word variations: 55.6007157086 60.7387585426 92% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.6666666667 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1254578368 49.517814964 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.666666667 127.492653851 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.99599198397 200% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.6666666667 49.1944974215 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.53658536585 1.69124875643 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.489173350377 0.332605444948 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.134979925815 0.102741220458 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0766262086923 0.0668466124924 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.504651108344 0.534860350844 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.121654460927 0.148594505496 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167679517983 0.134430193775 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112338943273 0.0742795772207 151% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.287226351741 0.324371583561 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.109723291447 0.0638462369009 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300865875714 0.228012699653 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921897445451 0.058150111329 159% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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