Everyone wants to live a good life and to enjoy it to the max and in order to do so some people keep on wandering to sundry places looking for better opportunities and facilities. But is this kind of approach towards living is positive for oneself and the society at large? Well, many might disagree with this notion however, I firmly advocate this view point and will justify it by providing evidences further in this essay.
To embark upon, living at one place forever is very wearisome. Conversely, there are a slew of incredible realms to see and it would be a boon to get a chance to enjoy the beauty of these places. Moreover, it is vital for good health too because it involves a lot of excitement and activeness which not only makes you merry but indeed rejuvenates too. For example, few weeks ago, my mother fell sick and became depressed. In spite, of best treatment given, she did not improve. Eventually, a doctor advised her to go to some hill station. Surprisingly, after going to Shimla due to the pleasant weather, she recovered swiftly.
Additionally, it acts like a benediction for the growth of an individual's career. Mostly, working at the same place for longer period of time ceases your upliftment as people will start taking you for granted. In contrast, a new job offer, mostly comes with better package and perks. Furthermore, you are also more enthusiastic to show your acquirement and to prove yourself. I can reminisce, when I begin working in a new hospital recently, I was very much excited to work and it benefited me to a great extent as my boss promoted me last week.
To recapitulate, I would like to endorse my view point assertively that the advantages of going to a new place far outweigh any negative repercussions because change is the biggest truth of nature in fact, even water gets ruined staying at one place for a long time. Therefore, it is essential for a human being to enjoy life by moving around and appreciate the beauty of nature worldwide.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun might seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much might', 'a good deal of might'.
Suggestion: much might; a good deal of might
...oneself and the society at large? Well, many might disagree with this notion however, I f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll, many might disagree with this notion however, I firmly advocate this view poi...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'slews'?
Suggestion: slews
...very wearisome. Conversely, there are a slew of incredible realms to see and it woul...
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Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
...ll sick and became depressed. In spite, of best treatment given, she did not improve. E...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...y, working at the same place for longer period of time ceases your upliftment as people will s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in contrast, in fact, kind of, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70655270655 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72583921576 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621082621083 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9928868825 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1764705882 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183304783889 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501444616044 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592593544916 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105284308572 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311224399859 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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