Some people prefer to stay in the same type of work all their life and others prefer to change their jobs from time to time. Discuss both sides and state your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge.
We are living in the globalization period, so we have a variety of opportunities to work many fields to figure out what is the best one. Some people prefer to change their jobs from time to time and others tend to spend all their life doing the same type of work. In my viewpoint, it is both two good choices depending the individual’s characteristics.
On the one hand, people who are likely to change their jobs usually because of their cultural effect. For example, the majority of Vietnamese people are farmers, so they need to have a sustainable place to settle and grow their plants or raise their cattles. They might not like the changes but something stable. Another reason that people just do one type of work for the whole life is that they adore their career, and cannot find any interests if they do another job. It is like their happiness when they can do their dream job every day.
On the other hand, people loving challenges are keen on doing different types of work so that they can get more experiences themselves. Besides, they also want to discover their potentials after working in many feilds. Furthermore, they are flexible, so they find it easy to get along well with their colleagues in a new workplace, especially, they can adapt to a new job faster than others. They may think they will recieve tremendous chances to get more money or get promotion if they get a new job.
To summarize, people are different and they have their own choices for their career. Obviously, pusuiting one job during their life time because their passion is great, and experiencing in many aspects to get meaninful lessons is wonderful as well. It is important that we make up their mind carefully to keep working in one feild or applying a new one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, so, well, for example, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67524115756 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57113717518 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533762057878 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4454823951 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255776712835 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107516556083 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112337822205 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185152935906 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827398604085 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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