Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be self employed, work for someone else, or own a business? Use specific reasons to explain your choice.
There are various types of occupations and companies around the world, some are better to function with a team, while others are better as an individual employee. Were I given a choice, I prefer to be self-employed or a freelancer.
For one thing, a freelancer can have a flexible and favorable working schedule. Instead of working seven days a week or eight hours a day, a freelancer can exert his or her time willingly. In this way, without bothering absences for important meetings or not being permitted to ask for leaves, freelancers are able to arrange their time for traveling abroad or relaxing when life is too stressful. Besides, freelancers can be more productive and motivated after resting appropriately.
For another thing, being self-employed or freelance enable people to develop themselves. Apart from saving time for relaxing, freelancers can acquire knowledge or professional skills by taking curriculums in community colleges or adult cram schools at free time. Take my friend, Amy, for example, she’s not only a blog-writer but also a photographer, and now learning French as second foreign language. Owning to diverse capabilities, businesses always come to Amy. Thus, it is beneficial to possess more than one professional skill in this competitive society.
Last but not least, freelancers can choose whoever to work with rather than being forced to face same people every day. On the contrary, working at a big company make people have no choice but to deal with complicated interpersonal relationships. When it comes to intricate social networks, it is usually associated with countless troubles and inconvenience, which make working less efficient. However, if cooperating with people by cases, people are likely to treat each other as customers and tend to be more respectful as well as polite.
Undoubtedly, though people can also benefit from learning others’ working methods in a company, it is better to avoid too many unnecessary interpersonal hassles and have more individual spaces and time. Hence, as far as I’m concerned, I aspire to be a writer and prefer to be a freelancer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, second, so, thus, well, while, another thing, apart from, for example, as well as, for another thing, for one thing, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27859237537 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10552338665 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609970674487 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1374857356 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.882352941 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0588235294 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1176470588 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278178508747 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858763154515 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468168723857 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140626352947 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187927739047 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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