Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Do you agree or disagree
Nobody would dispute the fact that advertisements are of paramount significance in this era for making a purchase. It is believed by some that adverts persuads the individuals to purchase those things which are not of any use. However, others opine that ads are the key influenicng factor of awaring people about newly released items that is impacting our life in a positive way. I agree with the latter view.
Apparently, with the advent of advanced media ads are a prominent factor in individuals life as people become aware about new products and makes a rational purchase. To illustrate, the advertisement of sanitisers were highly aggressive during COVID-19, consequently during this pandemaic people became cautious and adopted the policy to be protected from virus by using hand sanitisers frequently. Despite the fact that adverts irritates people while watching TV, they are of great contribution in making a thing publicise to large masses. Henceforth making it a easy task for corporates to introduce their articles on a larger spectrum.
Not only ads aware people but also they are a way of generating plethora of employment opportinities for people. Although there are other employment prospects available in market yet communication media such as TV, Radio and newspaper has extremely increased jobs especially for young ones thus boosting economy of country. To vindicate, According to BBC, 65% of youth is engaged in journalism as they deem that this sector is better in making them employed under renowed companies and fetching higher salary packages.
To conclude, advertisements are contructively beneficial for people as they displays new things to them and paves the way for brighter career.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33088235294 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95905412211 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6901319034 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.833333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143044482344 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545047711391 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378131548735 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095597770453 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488710732884 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.