Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisement tells us about new products that may improve our lives.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The main purpose of advertising is to provide information of products and services. It provides useful information which benefits consumers to find the right product at their convenient place. Advertising is one of the essential parts of marketing which essential thing which add plus point for a successful business. I do agree that to some extent advertisement attract customers towards unnecessary items that is useless but for those who are wise it is a beneficial tool for shopping.
On one hand, advertisements create awareness for the consumers to choose varieties of product and services which might be useful. For instance, consumers buy the newspaper, get discounts catalogue to find out the cheapest price in different stores. For those parent doesn't have a time they can buy lunch for themselves and other members of the family under single store after going through the special catalogue which helps save time to find out which product is on special.
On the other hand, advertising will make people spend more in those things which are not necessary for them. For example, whenever a person see specials like buy 1 and get the second one for half price they will buy two and pay extra money for the second one and they might not use the second item. Advertising is a good tool for the business but sometimes it is hard for people who are not wise for selecting their shopping list.
As a whole, advertisement a key to success for any business and it might be beneficial if you are a wise shopper, however if you can’t control yourself if you see unnecessary specials then you should use your brain.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, then, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70192458265 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539855072464 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4609086455 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.363636364 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138546426846 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677895433034 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394315400009 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946631066043 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317325338581 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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