Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
It is believed by few people that advertisements influence people to buy unnecessary goods or items while others think that advertisements are the good source for providing information about new things that can have positive impact in people's lives. In my opinion, commercials can lead to purchase of products that people do not require, however, it can also be informative source for knowing about latest important products available in the market.
To begin with, there are number of negative effects of advertisements. TV commercials that feature celebrities for the promotion of various items have had people buying those products which later they find that they should not have bought. Cosmetics, junk foods are two of many such things that people buy just because their favourite TV personals are the part of those product's advertisements, without even considering the real necessity of that product. Likewise, ads that contain false claims and promises also play a vital role in encouraging people to try out unwanted things. To exemplify, many people have bought items which claim to have surprise scratch cards included inside but most of the time fool them with ''Try Again" coupons.
Nevertheless, advertisements do provide with valuable information about new products that can be helpful. Firstly, ads help us to know about multipurpose items that have been manufactured to aid the daily works. For instance, kitchen items such as peelers, squeezers and latest grinders serve to do those works easily when used in place of traditional methodologies. In addition, genuine advertisements that ensure their product tag line and guarantees the outcome aid people to buy useful materials. For example, bluetooth headsets can be helpful for many while doing various activities. So advertisements that enable people to get information about it and hence buy it will definitely have positive influence.
In conclusion, while many advertisements today have led into people in buying unnecessary stuffs, ads do play an important role in providing information about the latest vital products.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 394, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the latest'.
Suggestion: about the latest
... also be informative source for knowing about latest important products available in the mar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, likewise, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44036697248 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99373228868 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562691131498 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4609720396 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.071428571 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4285714286 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262505443756 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973446087893 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596158058034 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170709087564 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469606455148 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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