Advertising industry have drawn a lot of people's attention recently. Many people believe that advertisement influence the mind of people to buy that particular product. Whereas, others argue that main purpose of ads is to provide people with the product information that helps to upgrade an individuals lifestyle. I agree with the latter one, as adverts help us to know the new products launched in the market and lastly it is up to a person whether they want to buy it or not.
Advertisement have a little effect on the mind of people. Sometimes, the fancy and creative ads created by the companies, attracts citizen and makes them to buy stuff which are not really necessary. Apart from this, many companies, hire celebrities to promote their product, this is the most influential thing on an individual especially for youngsters. As these teenagers blindly follows their favorite film star, they are encouraged in buying stuffs promoted by them. For instance, One Plus Mobile sale increased immensely, after a famous Hollywood actor Huge Jackman become an ambassador for the company.
On the other hand, advertisement has a bigger role to perform in the society. With the help of adverts, people are able to gain the knowledge regarding the upgraded or new products in the market. It also helps a company to reach large number of customers. When an important product like a medicine, a household item is marketed properly, it helps in the betterment of many individuals life. For instance, every one have a washing machine in their house, however, it would not be known by everyone without ads that now with the new technology, a water heating washing machine are available in the market giving Germ-Free wash. So, advertisement are important to spread awareness of the newly launched items.
In conclusion, even though sometimes ads attracts people to buy products that rte not really necessary for them. But, then it is an individual's decision whether or not they want to spend money on that product. However, I totally agree that ads play an important role in influencing people's life. Without ads people will not be able to have enough information about new products, and so advertisements are necessary to spread awareness regarding them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... people to buy that particular product. Whereas, others argue that main purpose of ads ...
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Line 1, column 292, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ct information that helps to upgrade an individuals lifestyle. I agree with the latter one,...
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Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...want to buy it or not. Advertisement have a little effect on the mind of people. ...
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Line 5, column 374, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...rly, it helps in the betterment of many individuals life. For instance, every one have a wa...
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Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...But, then it is an individuals decision whether or not they want to spend money on that produc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, really, regarding, so, then, whereas, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06451612903 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81585989427 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534946236559 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.699555941 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1578947368 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5789473684 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73684210526 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212006339574 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703029512081 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464433306722 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139129516847 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588900165915 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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