Some people say that it is impossible to live comfortably in big cities. What problems are faced by the people living in big cities? What solutions can be taken to solve this problem?
Cities are growing on a fast pace, nowadays. It is generally seen that in the metros individuals face many hardships in their day to day life. This essay highlights some of their issues that cause such troubles along with some remedies.
To begin with the reasons, firstly the cities are getting overcrowded because of the migration of people from rural areas. There are various big industries and Multi National Companies in cities which provide jobs opportunities to people of both rural and urban areas, thus the construction of new buildings takes place out of the capacity. Eventually, the facilities’ demand increases. For Instance, Delhi is facing the situation of water crisis because of over population. People have to buy water there, for completing their house hold tasks.
Beside this, income of people has increased thus, each and every member of the house have their private vehicle. As a result, the emission of dangerous gases from them cause both air and noise pollution. Due to which, respiratory disease like, asthama is spreading. Sounds from vehicles not only effects hearing but also disturbs the surroundings. Furthermore, the cost of living is relatively high in metros than the villages. The houses are very costly but people have to buy them because of their work, which in turn wastes their money on paying heavy amounts of interests of loans which they borrow to buy house. This leads to mental stress.
Even though there are some problems related to the big cities but also there are some steps which can be taken to improve the situation. On the first hand, the government should open industries in the rural areas so that people can get jobs there and thus the rate of migration will decrease. In addition to this the authorities should make plans to overcome the lack 0f facilities’ problem. Also, the taxes collected by them can be invested in the construction of roads and flyovers to solve the problem of road congestion.
To sum up, the poor planning and centralization of jobs are common reason for the current situation but by applying a few remedies the problem can overcome.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, thus, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02535211268 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68263683136 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574647887324 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1226856196 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25353826044 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621910367679 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590908253476 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123240320633 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075206467529 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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