Living in major cities can be perceived by some to be uncomfortable. Some of the problems faced by people living in metropolitan areas are high cost of living and increased rate of crime. Decentralization of cosmopolitan areas and increase in the rate of security measures are some of the ways to curb these problems.
The two major issues associated with living in a town are increased cost of living and high rate of crime which make living in this area difficult. People who reside in a township area find it very difficult to afford a homely apartment. Most apartments available for rent are too expensive to afford and the cheap ones are most time worn off and dilapidated. In addition, inhabitants of city centre areas are always living in fear of being robbed because of the high level of criminal activities in these area. For instance, a report carried out in the largest city in Nigeria, Lagos showed that an average Nigerian cannot afford to live comfortably in this city because of the high cost of rent. There has also been reported cases of constant robberies in these areas.
0Decentralization of large township areas and increase in the level of security measures in place in these areas are some of the ways to resolve these problems. Most people move to large cities in search of greener pastures because that is where a lot of companies are situated. By decentralizing these companies and ensuring that they are located across different region, people will not have reasons to migrate. As result, the demand for houses would not surpass the supply thus, aiding the reduction in renting a flat. Furthermore, increasing security measures will help abate the issue of stealing and other immoralities. People who perpetuate these crimes would be aware that security officials are on their trail and once they are caught, they would be living the rest of their lives behind bars. For example, in developed countries where industries are decentralized, houses in central area are very affordable, hence, people are able to live comfortably in these region. In addition, regions with high level of security measures reported fewer cases of people breaking law and order as reported in the New York times published on the 25th of May, 2020.
In summary, living in a metropolis can sometimes be unpleasant. Some of the issues causing this can be attributed to high standards of living and high rate of illegal activities. The two main solutions that can help address these problems are decentralization of cit centres and increase level of security measures.
- Write a letter to a friend asking for a recipe from his her country for the party you are organizing In your letter Tell your friend about the party Ask for the recipe Explain why you need the recipe from his her country 73
- Some people say that it is impossible to live comfortably in big cities What problems are faced by the people living in big cities What solutions can be taken to solve this problem 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
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Message: Did you mean 'this region' or 'these regions'?
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Suggestion: May 2020
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 41.998997996 181% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2146.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99069767442 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79099223252 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46976744186 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 706.5 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4624464347 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.3 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277561446841 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952735792127 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835451175399 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209605968989 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587565233849 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.