some people say that the more a product is advertised more people but it. To what extend do you agree?
Undoubtedly, purchasing essential are the unavoidable part of an inidividual's day to day life. It is widely considered that marketing of products paves the ways to its consumers. Personally, I believe that sales of product depend on its advertisement, but it is not the only way.
To begin with, it is a well-recognized fact that advancement in the advertisement industry has exponentially increased the publicity of the goods, which encourage customer to purchase it by giving compelling demonstrations. For example, add of any new product provides its visual and show users how to use it, therefore, influencing them to buy. Besides, many companies use influencer or social icon to achieve trust of customers, for an instance, Virat Koli, the famous cricket player is now a part of various marketing adds. As a result, sales figures are accelerating with the rise in marketing.
In contrast, The One reason that stand out is the local product sale, even though there is no marketing of them but quality of it is a major contributing factor for it. Another type is the ayurvedic items, Nowadays, health-conscious people prefer chemical free articles. Thus, we can say that quality play a significant role in consumption.
Having said that, Although, advertisement enhance the sales but quality assurance is an area of concern these days, that can be obtained with incorporation of quality standards by government ensuing in deacceleration the promotion of deleterious objects.
To conclude, in my opinion, marketing and publicity of product features have improvised the sale, though there are other auxiliary facts which contribute to it. However, Government needs to take extra precaution about the quality.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...days, preferred by people more and more as they are concerned about their health. ...
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Line 4, column 86, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ance the sales but quality assurance is a area of concern these days, incorporati...
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Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
...orating quality standards by government can possibly deaccelerate consumption of deleterious...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33590733591 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18666872459 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640926640927 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1890626811 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111231484702 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381099335807 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596381362979 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588288191628 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566905566861 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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