Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free times. others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Disuss both view and give your own opinion.
In today's generation, the popularity of group activities has increased compared to the previous generation. Some people argue that parents have to cheer their children to participate in group activities, while others believe that juvenile has to learn what is best for themselves. In my opinion, team activities are more beneficial for every child. But we cannot forget that for every activity team is not necessary.
There are plenty of advantages for the offspring if they take part in community activities. To start with, they can learn how to interact with others in their community. Not only that, but children also get an opportunity to explore global culture during group activities. Besides that, some activities are safe if they are doing in the group. For instance, most of the sports performed under supervision, so there is less chance for any accident. Additionally, during these kinds of activities, they can learn to identify people like who is the right friend for them, because fake friends are dangerous and a sell-out.
Moreover, the child can develop many new skills at an early age such as communication, leadership, and team spirit during the team activities. To illustrate, children can learn the importance of working together to achieve a common goal in sports like football and cricket. Furthermore, they can interact with senior and experienced people to find a solution of problem at the workplace while working on team projects.
On the other hand, working alone introduce some positive points in an individual's life. First and foremost, it gives opportunities to show our hidden talents. For example, when juveniles stay at home in their leisure time they try to draw paintings, make some handcrafts that help to introduce their silent skills. To add in this, doing something alone help to become independent. Finally, it helps to build confidence.
To conclude, it is irrefutable that working in the team helps to develop some skills such as social, team spirit, communication, and leadership. But we cannot underestimate the benefits of self-working. self-working show our hidden talent to the world and improve self-confidence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ne introduce some positive points in an individuals life. First and foremost, it gives oppo...
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Line 9, column 204, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Self-working
...restimate the benefits of self-working. self-working show our hidden talent to the world and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30346820809 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96902972233 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560693641618 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0300773606 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.380952381 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4761904762 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.80952380952 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215313578201 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593114554577 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062058920473 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113208287713 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741606013315 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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