Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Several people believe that learners in universities should study subjects they like in their majors. While other people think that leaners' duties are study subjects that are useful for them in the future, such as maths, physics, chemistry,... In my opinion, I think students should learn about the subjects they need.
There are various reasons why students should only offer subjects that will be useful in the future. First of all, The diversity of subjects helps students to develop their skills in the study. It helps learners to choose their majors easily. For example, subjects related to science and technology used for study in majors like medicine, Information Technology, engineering. On the other hand, study a lot of subjects can waste much time for learners' study. Secondly, students have many chances to apply for popular jobs after graduating from universities and they can become doctors, engineers, programmers or maybe professors in the future.
In spite of these statements, students should be free to choose whatever they like to study. In fact, passion is the best way which helps students focus on their main subjects and develops strengths. Besides that, offloading unnecessary subjects is very useful for saving much time, students do not need to worry about the heavy burden of study, just spend their time on self-cultivation and relaxation.
Overall, both views are very well. In my opinion, I prefer the education in which people have the right to study whatever they like than studying so many subjects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, i think, in fact, such as, first of all, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20564516129 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60701933593 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556451612903 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0406279182 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2142857143 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.45583722508 0.244688304435 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158319353825 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105313061914 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277551854078 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091682993268 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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